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what i feel for you
Contributed by
hermoiii
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Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 04:47:05 PM in AEST
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you passed me by unknowingly
and made a spark of possibilty
i dare not try to risk my life
coz failure is obvious i just might die
but now i can't bare to keep these from you
i'd rather be dead than lie to you
these words of love i cannot say
maybe because i don't want to lose you and be astray
but one thing is clear
and a thousand ways real
that what i feel for you
is immense love that i should endear
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2003-06-25 16:47:05]
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Re: Re: what i feel for you
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Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 07:45:53 PM AEST
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| very nice, keep it up! |
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Re: Re: what i feel for you
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Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 03:24:39 PM AEST
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| tnx for the comment... actually i gave this poem to a special person of mine but instead of appreciating it he just said that i should not write about stupid stuff... |
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Re: Re: what i feel for you
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Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 12:26:52 PM AEST
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| This is beautifully written...such talents you have.... |
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Re: Re: what i feel for you
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Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 04:08:59 PM AEST
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| thank you very much... hope you like what you have just read... thank you again... you just build up my confidence thank you!!! |
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Re: Re: what i feel for you
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Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 10:07:25 PM AEST
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| i really liked it, i Am suprised that anyone would comment rudly on this... im also unsure why this was put in the members special section... anyways you have a great talent and i look foward to reading more of your work. ~Apryl |
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