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A Theory Within Time
Contributed by
daprdan
on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 01:23:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Didactic
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Space and time are intertwined
Realatively where is time?
If space is here then time is too
If time is here then space makes two
A linear measure from future-past
Present is the measure cast
Momement by moment time we check
Memory by memory we recollect
A philosophical time is here
It flows from past to future year
Speed is aslo part of mind
Travel in vacuum another kind
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daprdan
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2006-06-22 13:23:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Re: A Theory Within Time
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Sunday, 6th August 2006 @ 07:41:51 AM AEST (User
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A philsophical read with a poetic presence the idea is golden. You could go deeper into the minds by spacing words out and stretching time out. It can be effective in getting the reader to think as they read more!! Great poem
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