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Blackened Sky
Contributed by
neptunes_first
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 08:18:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguouspoetry
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Drizzle floats past sparkled glass,
a palm supports an inattentive gaze
upon the horizontal blur.
There are spaces here: Gaps
without bridges.
thoughts without meaning
swirled up within the clouds
that churn across my
blackened sky.
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neptunes_first
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2005-03-10 08:18:54]
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Re: Re: Blackened Sky
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 10:01:53 AM AEST
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* Thinks what to say *
* In deep thought *
I Like it, dark and deep. Good work as always hmmm...
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Re: Re: Blackened Sky
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Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 10:49:50 PM AEST
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| this is one of your more shorter posts that i have seen. i would say that i really like the imagery i see in this, and considering i hardly ever see any images in poems, this obviously was better imagery wise than 98 percent of the poems ive read. the vagueness also gives this a tone that i like, and it fits the poem perfectly. |
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