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Lovers
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 05:27:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
eroticpoetry
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as I lay my head down to sleep
I dream of you and me
and of our bodies joining together
like the river joins the sea
our bodies move together
perfectly in sinc
emotions and feelings are so strong
it gets harder just to think
I look into your beautiful
that deep sensual shade of blue
your hands brush softly threw my hair
our moans are the only sound
our breathing becomes heavier
were getting closer to heavenly bliss
then you lean down
and give me a never ending kiss
as our bodies are glistening with sweat
we reach an ecstasy that we will never forget
as we wind down
and our breathing calms
we lay there in each others arms
embracing all night long
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ShadowsCloud
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2003-04-24 05:27:32]
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Re: Re: Lovers
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Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 07:18:59 AM AEST
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Excellent again Candice,
Except you missed out the word 'eyes', but that didn't detract from this lovely, well written dream of yours, it's just me being picky for a change!?!
Like mentioned before Candice, you certainly do have the talent for getting down on paper with clarity and rhythm your best and most sensual of dreams. Very enjoyable read!
I wish I could do this so well, oh well.
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Re: Lovers
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Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 03:12:54 AM AEST
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Dean,
I did not even notice that I had missed the word eyes, untill you said something. I must be slipping.
I guess I really do have a talent for getting the dreams down on paper. I have a couple of friends that are always asking if I have written about any more dreams. They really enjoy reading them as well as everything else that I write. I am pretty good at writing about this type of thing even when it isn't a dream. Perhaps that is why I am writing a romance novel. I think that maybe it is the hopeless romantic in me that had me very able to write like this?
You never know, one day you might just write one like this that will surprise you because it is so good. That was how it was for me when I wrote the frist one of this type of poem.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: Re: Lovers
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Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 08:35:02 PM AEST
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| beautiful and erotic!! |
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Re: Re: Lovers
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Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 11:37:25 PM AEST
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| hey candice i like this peom and i think you're doing very well with them also. |
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Re: Re: Lovers
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Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 04:20:29 AM AEST
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| Very beautifully written..so much tenderness and sweetness.. venkat |
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