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Passion
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 04:52:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
eroticpoetry
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Here we are, in eachothers arms,
The moment of truth, the moment of proof,
The candle light, and the moon shining bright,
The mood is set, as I gently kiss your neck,
The smell of your perfume, fills the room,
I kiss your breast, my hands begain to roam,
Searching for your warmth, that I can call home,
Slowly I move down, in search of my playground,
The grass is damp, like morning dew, I will enjoy making love to you,
I gently nibble your inner thigh, the taste of your necter has me so high,
Warm breathe on your lips, I see you tremble, you anticipate my kiss,
Softly I press, as your mound I caress,
Your eyes close, and your passion flows,
As I begain to dine, it's only a matter of time,
I raise up, and position myself above,
You reach down and say, let me guide your way,
As I enter, your body surrenders,
With each stroke, your body becomes soaked,
Erupting emotions, we both fall into love's ocean,
Holding eachother tight, as I explode inside.
Forever faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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2003-04-01 04:52:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Re: Passion
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Thursday, 3rd April 2003 @ 11:28:39 AM AEST (User
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Very romantic and sensual! well done! Larry |
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Re: Re: Passion
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Thursday, 3rd April 2003 @ 09:56:30 PM AEST (User
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Thank you Rakerman1999, it was my first shot at writing a poem of this kind, Thank you.
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Re: Re: Passion
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Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 04:13:01 PM AEST (User
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Wow, Phantom, seems like your first time was very good for you..keep up the passion!!
This was great...
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Re: Re: Passion
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Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 11:32:05 PM AEST (User
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Thank you Jenni, I'm glad you liked it. I tried. Much love.
Matt |
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Re: Re: Passion
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Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 08:58:51 PM AEST (User
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warm and beautiful!! soft and sensuous !!
your friend, nessa |
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Re: Re: Passion
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Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 03:46:29 AM AEST (User
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Thank you Ladyfawn, I'm glad you like it. i thought I'd take a shot at this kind of poetry. Thank you.
The phantom |
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Re: Re: Passion
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Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 06:49:21 AM AEST (User
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You know and love your baby..this is so obvious in the movement of your words :)..You two have a great "friendship of the skin" Beautiful!! |
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