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finalstraw
Contributed by
merry
on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 09:45:00 AM in AEST
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Dark
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diminished in a single breath
turned into dust
blown away by arrogance
no longer able to smile
through the pain of love
that was never love at all
a fool's game
I was forfeited
the prize
costing me forever and always
needed but not loved
I understand it now
too late - too late - too late
run into the ground
head first and angry
kicking myself
save face is what she taught me
and save face is what I do
false dignity disgraced
cowardly sleep
kiss me to death
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-11-14 09:45:00]
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Re: Re: finalstraw
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Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 11:36:36 AM AEST
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Awww wow this is brilliant, beautiful and sad at the same time. I hope everythings okay...
*hugs*
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: Re: finalstraw
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Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:38:36 PM AEST
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| strong beginning and powerful end. excellent transition. |
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