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Growing In Love
Contributed by
neptunes_first
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Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:09:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveorRomantic
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Children we were, when we first met -
A girl and a boy, in love’s silhouette.
From the shadow behind us, ‘tween our souls and our love,
Destiny blessed us, as I know she should’ve.
Children now older, between eyes ‘cross a bar,
Our love is rekindled, ascendant, like star.
‘Tween our gazes so longing past forlorn regret,
Our differences dwindle o’er times we forget.
This man would’ve cared more, if only he knew
There’s nothing as painful as heartbreak with you.
So in difference conceded to yearning remorse,
We gaze through the smoke, as our star takes its course.
We meet up and talk of familiar things,
Like solitude’s space and the luck that it brings
In the night 'till this light flares in solitary shine
And I blink into yours, and you blink into mine . . .
Arabesque in our shadow, fate’s form does entwine
Fraying paths of our lives in the luck of divine.
We draw closer together, ‘neath our nourishing sun
As we grow in its splendour
And in love, become One.
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neptunes_first
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Re: Re: Growing In Love
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Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 07:05:48 PM AEST
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I'm struck by a silly thought... if the others put this next to a few of my latest submissions - they may think WE had a thing going on! lol!!! Let's just say it's ridiculously familiar to me at the moment and I know whereof you speak. You've done the moment justice. Amazing isn't to reconnect!? Very, very lovely and I'm sure, very dear to you.
You leave me pitter pattering a bit-
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Re: Re: Growing In Love
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:28:32 AM AEST
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this is beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Re: Growing In Love
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Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:39:06 PM AEST
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A wonderful write. We go down many roads as we grow, hopefully we are able to meet back at the same spot where we met our love in the first place.
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Re: Re: Growing In Love
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Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 02:21:47 AM AEST
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| beautiful write |
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