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Everything Turned
Contributed by
merry
on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 06:04:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveorRomantic
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Outline sketched in black and white
Nothing I could hold onto
But I kept filling in the blanks
Each day another hue revealed
Clues to what I thought I saw
Something playful something brooding
In the eyes of one man’s soul
Everything turned inside out
Compelling need to understand
Hiding pain behind his laughter
Let me in to comfort you
Quiet moments close together
We let our friendship grow
Then it transforms
Into need that builds like steam
Demanding immediate attention
Craving for so much more
Than we ever thought there was
Lure me closer and closer still
Yielding all to you each night
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-06-10 18:04:14]
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Re: Re: Everything Turned
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Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 06:52:38 PM AEST
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mmm mmmm...this almost sounds like you have a big time crush on this guy. ;o) If he does ya wrong you just call on the king and I'll stomp on him.
Roses for my daisy
Larry |
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Re: Re: Everything Turned
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Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 05:56:48 PM AEST
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This is great stuff, merry. So absorbing!
I loved the progressive description - it made it so real to me.
Thanks for writing it. |
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Re: Re: Everything Turned
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:51:46 AM AEST
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sensuous and beautiful gaille, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Re: Everything Turned
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Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:09:12 PM AEST
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A wonderful write about passion.
Gentledove |
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Re: Re: Everything Turned
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Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 04:37:50 PM AEST
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Yep, that's the way it happens. Starts with just one interesting conversation and just blossoms from there.
Stitch |
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