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Sad Songs and Raindrops
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 08:57:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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lie here spread across my floor
i do not exist anymore
singing quietly to the words
of sad songs verse by verse
a thick heat overtakes my mind
slowly confuses every rhyme
a stench of cold in my room
a lonely soul's end comes soon
cry to the rhythm of the rain
cut to the rhythm of the pain
fears form the shape of a knife
tears form the shape of a life
yet still i remain here until time stops
singing to sad songs and raindrops
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blue_angel
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2005-07-03 08:57:07]
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Re: Sad Songs and Raindrops
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by New_York_Chick on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 11:36:22 AM AEST
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| great write |
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Re: Sad Songs and Raindrops
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by CarolinaBlue on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 02:12:36 PM AEST
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| however sad, this was beautifully written. Good job! ~Blue~ |
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Re: Sad Songs and Raindrops
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by spazz911 on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 12:29:40 PM AEST
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sad, but a great write, keep em up
me |
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Re: Sad Songs and Raindrops
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by ShadowFox on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 03:16:59 AM AEST
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| Sad, but beautiful |
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