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BETRAYAL
Contributed by
thumper
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Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 01:22:28 AM in AEST
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Brain screaming silently
Heart bleeding violently
Thoughts of payback begin
Gut wrenching agony
Spasms inside of me
When was it.. our love did end?
Two decades of wanting
Your love, keeps on haunting
You gave it to her, instead!
Sitting here dying
Eyes dry from crying
Wondering will the pain ever end?
Copyright ©
thumper
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2005-07-03 01:22:28]
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Re: BETRAYAL
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by grin69 on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 01:28:31 AM AEST
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| hello. I liked this poem. Sorry you're in pain. Hope things get better. |
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Re: BETRAYAL
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by CarolinaBlue on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 02:13:26 AM AEST
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| I am so sorry, I know there's no words that can truly make you feel better in this situation because I went through it not too long ago myself. Didn't have as many years in as yourself, but it still hurts just as much when the love of your life loves another. Better out then in, glad you could vent. good write! ~Blue~ |
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Re: BETRAYAL
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by bernard on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 04:01:31 AM AEST
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| Nice write thumper. I hope you find someone that does not go astray. I hate two timeingBernard |
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Re: BETRAYAL
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by venkat on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 01:58:18 AM AEST
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| My God , what a powerful write..Nice come back.... venkat |
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Re: BETRAYAL
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 03:13:26 AM AEST
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I cant even comment here
Because I never been through
it. All i can say is i feel for you |
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Re: BETRAYAL
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 10:21:12 PM AEST
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Well can't say if it ends I do know that it's much easier to bear at times.
Jus keep on doin what u do best and that's writing then someday look back at your healin process and I'm sure you'll find wonder in it all.
Finally found one I missed here.
sorry I've been so slow. I bearly take time to post my own these days.
All your writings just reach out-n-grab the reader as you shape life into awesome words.
Big huggs,
emy
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