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Scattered Pieces
Contributed by
Onslaught
on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 11:48:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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I am a bit of everyone
Scattered pieces made up from it all
A million thoughts run through my mind
But none of which are my own
I have no true identity
What you see
Is the sum of everything
I hold those truths that are known
By some
And provide it for those who know not
I don’t choose who is lead to me
On the path, they came however
Serving fate or destiny
But always arriving
With the same needs
I do what I do
But leaving
They draw their separate conclusions
And go off in their own direction
Taking with them a piece of me
I am a bit of everyone
Scattered pieces made up from it all
A million thoughts run through my mind
But none of which are my own
I have no true identity
What you see
Is the sum of everything
Copyright ©
Onslaught
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2005-07-02 23:48:07]
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Re: Scattered Pieces
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 12:01:48 AM AEST
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| i always enjoy your writing thats why i read them all. Keep up the good poems |
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Re: Scattered Pieces
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 01:20:29 AM AEST
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This is really good Mike. I honestly am lacking of words right now. But i liked this.
Jane xxx |
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Re: Scattered Pieces
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 03:46:43 AM AEST
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unconventional...I can honestly say that I have been within similar circumstances of questioning...
It is a difficult process, yet I think you have expressed yourself rather clearly and effectively.
A thought provoking piece x) |
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