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Loss of god

Contributed by feathercut on Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 11:40:14 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I stray when you stray,
I stray when you stray,
Ill stray when youll stray
i stray when you stray,
nothing stays
we are all strays

a desert call ripping from my lungs
my blood aching burning my bones
you came so soon,
maybe you never came at all....
these things are so hard to see
but weve got eyes so that means something
i cant believe this is the truth
ruthless,
we are precious,
but we were never,
anything to you,
the rocks came down
to beat us gone,
how you allowed
to fall upon
its going away
its fading now
and i am losing everything,
cause the cause i beg you
for a reason
why we never saw this lake before
or this prison
or this room
where no bodies left
no stupid tombs,
only a darkness

i stray when you stray,
i stray when you stray,
ill stray when youll stray,
wont you see me now,
please turn your eyes around
god nothing stays
we are all just strays

hiding in a home in december
she touched my face in the dark
we held eachothers eyes
to see what was not lost
i told her not to speak,
but she couldnt hold it in,
and you found our love,
and set fire to our skin,

crying,
crying for you,
i need to feel something
you give me hollow night
and lead me by my hair
to death....

Copyright © feathercut ... [ 2005-07-02 23:40:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Loss of god (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 03:43:35 PM AEST
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That was definitely interesting and unique. Awesome job, I enjoyed
thinking my way through it trying to interpret it to what it could mean to me.

~Kara

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