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Contributed by
lil_noel09
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Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 11:13:03 PM in AEST
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I was wondering what do you think of this?
Do you think of it as just painful bliss?
Why do you make me feel so bad?
Why would you want to make me sad?
All you speak of is me, thats what they say.
If that true then who are they?
Where do they get this stuff?
From you or just a bluff?
Nervouse are you?
Well thats what lovers do,
Or is that not true?
It'll pass is the answer i get.
If it doesnt can i get a pet?
To replace the emptiness you'll leave.
In my heart caught in a weave.
No matter the plea.
Guilty will he be.
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lil_noel09
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2005-07-02 23:13:03]
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Re: questions
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by lil_noel09 on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 10:18:10 PM AEST
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| sorry its not really a poem...more like thoughts that were pouring out of my head. :D |
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Re: questions
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by english-pea-pelter on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 01:51:03 PM AEST
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this is a great write. keep up the good work my friend! much love,
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