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NO HOPE
Contributed by
kydistortion69
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Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 10:44:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Rivers of tears turned to blood,
washed away any hope of dreams,
all the truth lost to the flood,
swept away in a macabre scene;
Valleys of peace replaced by death,
spread desease across all lands,
no chance for faith to be fed,
the flames of Hell now in command;
Clouds of lies fill my mind,
showing a life of ghastly pain,
as I lay in this den of flies,
my body aches for better days.
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2005-07-02 22:44:01]
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Re: NO HOPE
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 10:59:22 PM AEST
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A poem filled with great emotion, I would love a better understanding on the line: as I lay in this den of flies:" very deep. Remember, we must hold on to hope.
Blessings
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Re: NO HOPE
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by PLformalyknownasPpaul on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 09:23:05 AM AEST
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stare into the darkness study it feel it and then take a step back and say "no thanks i'd rather live"
yes the darkness is beautful and there is nothing wrong with drinking of it without the dark we could not apreciate the light
but never let it consume you
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Re: NO HOPE
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by PLformalyknownasPpaul on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 09:28:44 AM AEST
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| Art clears the mind and fights of decay as does enjoying lifes pleasures |
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