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Poetry- Just another failure of mine
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 09:52:44 PM in AEST
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The poetry I try to create
Is like an earthquake
Ruins everything around
Destroys the beautiful ground
My poetry is failure
Just pure torture,
Something that I can’t do
Well, what’s new?
I can’t get the emotion out
So I’m just left in doubt
Whatever I do write
Just isn’t right
I know my poetry sucks
And everyone flinches and ducks
When they get the chance
To take a glance
Poetry is just another thing that I fail at
Even I know that
Just something else that I fail
Something on my sorry trail
The poetry I try to create
Is like an earthquake
Ruins everything around
Destroys the beautiful ground
Copyright ©
sprinter27
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2005-07-02 21:52:44]
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Re: Poetry- Just another failure of mine
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by hoist1atca on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 10:31:24 PM AEST
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What is a failure?
No advice save this:
Always write what you feel and not what you think-
Although others may not like what you write it is your feelings that you put to pen-
By the way, I did like this poem...
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Re: Poetry- Just another failure of mine
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 11:18:10 PM AEST
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I don't think you give yourself enough credit, you are saying more than you think. Write from the heart, for there will bring life to your words, keep shareing.
Blessings
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Re: Poetry- Just another failure of mine
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by grin69 on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 01:37:40 AM AEST
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| hello. Hey don't be so hard on yourself. I think you're a great poet! You just expressed yourself...isn't this what it's all about? Don't give up! |
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Re: Poetry- Just another failure of mine
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by priss on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 02:50:09 AM AEST
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| there is no failure here, you write about your feelings and you do it well. |
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Re: Poetry- Just another failure of mine
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 10:58:44 PM AEST
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| haha .. this poem totally made me smile .. keep up your "horrible" poetry!! |
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Re: Poetry- Just another failure of mine
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by spazz911 on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 12:45:41 PM AEST
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do you even read your poems??? cause ur a great writer all you have to do is write about wat ur feeling, which you r so u r automattically a great poet, so ha, i proved that this is no failure but a gift, dont abuse it use it
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