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My Jail
Contributed by
JustAGirl001
on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 06:40:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Don't Stay,
just get away.
I can't change the past,
and I'm coming in last.
After all the cuts and scars,
I'm still locked up beneath these bars.
It's just like a jail,
but without any bail.
Copyright ©
JustAGirl001
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2005-07-02 18:40:37]
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Re: My Jail
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by hoist1atca on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 10:39:23 PM AEST
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Good write-
Sometimes the bars are not there to confine yet to protect-
Sometimes the past has a way of tearing apart a soul and leaving it to die-
Since we cannot change it ,maybe we should not dwell on it...
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Re: My Jail
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 11:59:04 AM AEST
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| I feel how you feel. Being confined to feeling pain all of the time. It is a death sentence, but like the comment said above... we shouldn't dwell on it |
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Re: My Jail
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 11:59:12 AM AEST
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I feel how you feel. Being confined to feeling pain all of the time. It is a death sentence, but like the comment said above... we shouldn't dwell on it...
Jodi |
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Re: My Jail
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by justme03 on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 02:33:49 PM AEST
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i like this one A LOT and totally agree with the ppl above. Awesome write! luv ya
~Kortnie~ |
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Re: My Jail
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 02:41:16 PM AEST
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LOVE this!!!!
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