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No title. It's just a rant
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 06:22:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I want to puke.
I am lost.
I am hurt.
I let go.
I give in
to all of them.
And what do I get?
Lust, lies and consequence.
Who am I?
No one.
Do not try to coax me
I thought that innnocence
could protect me.
But I am not innocent.
Who's fault is that?
I realize what I mean to all of you
what I am.
Thanks alot. Bastards.
Copyright ©
Inevitable
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2005-07-02 18:22:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: No title. It's just a rant
(User Rating: 1 ) by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 11:53:51 AM AEST (User
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Hmm... I have felt this way before. At the begining of this you just listed things. It would be really interesting if you would be able to make it into something more than just a list. Like make comparisons to create that feeling. I am sure you know what I mean. Anyways, I feel your pain in this...
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