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Two Sad People
Contributed by
Anne-ish
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Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 06:12:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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oh what a bore!
bore, bore
boor,
boar.
i'm getting the greens
it's in my eyes
and growing under my fingernails
yes some people get the blues but, I get the greens
yes some people are luckier than me...
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Anne-ish
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2005-07-02 18:12:07]
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Re: Two Sad People
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 09:38:28 PM AEST
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| i dont know what quite to say about this one. i imagine that many wont. i really dont see whats the point with the beginning stanza, and youre second stanza certainly was creative. very colorful. |
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Re: Two Sad People
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 11:24:09 PM AEST
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OK....found this to be a WOW...read, not certain where it was going. It does make you stop and think.
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Re: Two Sad People
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 11:44:51 AM AEST
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Hmm... I don't really get it. Like, I don't see what the greens really have to do with anything or what the bore area had to do with anything. Sure green is a color, but it is just weird to make it into a sickness. I don't know, the whole thing is very creative, but it is creative with no real point. Well, if you can write on other things with the creativity that you have, it would be really great...
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