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Gotham
Contributed by
CodyJ
on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 04:41:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Stars splay lewdly across black concrete,
skyscraper grafitti rising up from the street,
cold, arrogant buildings defying the world.
The sin soaked city's a twisted sister,
that doles out fate like a whirling twister,
random and vengeful at the drop of a hat.
"I've got bats in my belffy," a man said to me,
as he took off with my wallet, I nodded polietly,
because there's always time for manners.
He'll go off to the city, with my single and five,
to ebb his addiction , she'll let him survive
another night of equaling assault.
If you take the time to heed the laughter,
to pray to the gods, avoiding disaster
may only be inches outside your grasp.
But if you can't escape her harsh humanity,
you'll lose your life, or just your sanity,
because the city.... the city, she will consume you.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
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2005-07-02 16:41:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Gotham
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 11:00:40 PM AEST (User
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This was a super write. I could feel the grit and chill of the city. The lines "skyscraper grafitti rising up from the street, cold, arrogant buildings defying the world" WOW. That was heavy. Being the country girl I am I do not care for the big city. I was born in St. Louis Missouri, but I'm glad I didn't have to grow up there. Again man, great piece of writing. Peace to you. Laura |
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