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Morning Commute
Contributed by
CarolinaBlue
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Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 04:06:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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unstoppable
always moving
filled with life
crowds are pooling
doors they open
people get out
pushing shoving
rushing about
more flood inward
the doors they close
look for a seat
quick! off we go
paper in hand
briefcase at feet
late start today
the boss to meet
will i make it?
runs through my mind
haven't had coffee
not enough time
staring faces
fixed upon me
were they late too?
yes, probably
through the tunnel
we're almost there
standing up now
have to prepare
brakes are applied
hear the wheels screech
here comes my stop
doors i must reach
people in line
cramming about
Hurry! doors open
Please! let me out
through the subway
straight to the stairs
checking my watch
Phew! 10 minutes to spare
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Re: Morning Commute
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by priss on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 02:27:37 AM AEST
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| rush hour is always worse without coffee. i like this poem. |
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Re: Morning Commute
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 04:24:35 PM AEST
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WOW..
sounds like many a day for me-
I once worked at Logan Airport and would commute by subway twice a day..
(Blue Line)
I was immersed in this write all the way through.
(rush hour's the worst..God those staring faces
standing for 4 or 5 stops...)
Great write!
B |
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Re: Morning Commute
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 09:07:09 PM AEST
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I loved this, Blue..... really describes to me what I have heard about but never experienced..Thank God...lol
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