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Falling for Blue with a Capital B
Contributed by
hooray_its_jen
on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 10:35:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Gazing into the
Blue,
My favorite color,
(And I’ll say it again – my
Favorite color)
I just can’t help but
Fall.
For Blue is the only thing that
Catches my eye,
Captures my thoughts,
My hopes,
My dreams…
(My reflection,
Brown)
I remember the day I
Fell in love with
Blue
(And yes, Blue with a capital “B�
Because
It’s important enough to me)
And I, always wishing
For better,
(Better what? Better anything,
I guess)
Was satisfied.
With Blue.
Plain old Blue.
(Yes, Blue.)
(Yes, you.)
More than satisfied.
And
Once again, I
Fall…
Fall and keep on falling.
(Yes, in love with Blue.)
(Yes, in love with you.)
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2005-07-02 10:35:35]
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Re: Falling for Blue with a Capital B
(User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 03:19:14 PM AEST
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Ohh i'm shocked that no one has commented on this yet. That's just not nice.
Anyways, you know i like this. It was creatively done and the rhyming could not be more perfect. I just love this because blue is my favorite color too.
Hugs,
Jane xxx |
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Re: Falling for Blue with a Capital B
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 03:10:25 AM AEST
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I'm another fan of blue... and I love this. I didn't love it just because you're speaking of blue - honestly, I'm picky about how blue is used, so you easily could have lost my interest if I didn't find what you did with it appealing. But this:
(Yes, Blue.)
(Yes, you.)
... was fabulous! I was liking the write already - but that... that really touched me.
Beautiful, Jen... truly.
~Snemmy |
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Re: Falling for Blue with a Capital B
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 10:46:19 PM AEST
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I love any shade or hue of blue. I am blue because you are leaving YPDC. I know you are busy with school but it seems this is how it must be. Just know, Jen, that I wish you the very best of life and love and hope life gets on an even keel now for you and your family. Please hug little Anna for me and one for your too.
Warm hugs n luv,
Rita |
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