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We Found Utopia and Ran Away With it
Contributed by
burnthefire
on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 10:45:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You spilled hope on your diary.
It dried up and froze before your eyes.
The radiance of the sun,
Nor the brilliance of the moon,
Could never recall such a fantasy.
I made you a card,
To help you feel better.
"I love your silent remedies,
And the way you catch the shadows,
So lovingly in your arms."
We were stunning.
Talented and practiced artists.
Synchronized composers,
Easily charming the brainless audience,
And the speechless critics.
Endless pirouettes,
That were beautifully self-assured.
It's safe to say we were content,
With our captivating ballet.
We were dancing with the shadows.
Copyright ©
burnthefire
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2005-07-01 22:45:27]
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Re: We Found Utopia and Ran Away With it
(User Rating: 1 )
by remember_the_moon on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:13:00 PM AEST
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i love you so effing much.
i love this as well.
YAY BRANDILICIOUS!!!! |
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Re: We Found Utopia and Ran Away With it
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by Dri on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 01:24:57 PM AEST
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| this is so beautiful, well written and the imagery is so crisp. this is wonderful, i'd love to see more! |
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Re: We Found Utopia and Ran Away With it
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by enigma on
Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 07:43:45 PM AEST
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Dri is absolutely right...you create images that express the desire of every human heart...but you sprinkle in snippets of foreboding that can be easily ignored if what we want to feel is the allure of the moment…we want to feel, but, the knowing is the dynamic…who that has lived hasn't lived it…
…enjoyed…appreciated…liked…loved…none of these fit…
…so for now, I ________ it…
ron…enigma
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