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I Hate To Do This To You
Contributed by
apcfan
on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 09:09:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I hate to do this to you
But you need to know that I cant take the pressure
Of this cold cold world
So please pull my plug
I hate to do this to you
But I dont know what to do
So can you please pull the trigger
I promise It wont hurt me
I hate to do this to you
But I have thought of everything and this
Is the only thing I could thing of
So please dont be sad it wasnt your fault
I hate to do this to you
But it has to happen
So please give me the bottle and unscrew the lid
Ill go peacefully so dont worry
I hate to do this to you
But its the only way to end your pain
So please dont follow me
Cause its not your time, its mine
I hate to do this to you
But its my only escape
Ill pour the gasoline, if you light the match
Its not your problem its mine, so dont worry about me
I hate to do this to you
But its the only way I know how to stop this nightmare
Please dont cry
I love you
I hate to do this to you
But its hard Ive been through this too many times
So please hand me that rope
And dont look back
I hate to do this to you
But I cant handle this anymore
Its my time to go, so please dont wait
Cause no one can save me now!
Copyright ©
apcfan
... [
2005-07-01 21:09:07]
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Re: I Hate To Do This To You
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 09:22:06 PM AEST
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good write... and i hope the WAS in the author's comment means that it is over. and i really hope that you aren't like me, always wishing for death. because i know if i was the person you were talking to, i'd be dragging you somewhere where there was no gas, knives, rope, guns or anything that you could hurt yourself with. i really hope that you aren't feeling like this anymore. wishing you the best of luck!!
~sprints
p.s. keep up the good work! |
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Re: I Hate To Do This To You
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by Archie on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 02:16:28 AM AEST
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| I hope as you mature as a writer and a person that you will learn to be more of a peacemaker. In your poem i see a destructive element to your writing. In your attitude I see a "listen to me" kind of voice I'm just guessing here but you are probably younger than 20 and need to find a voice for yourself that describes you. Choose one that will not eventually get you in a lot of trouble! |
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