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Vagrant
Contributed by
olddarkme
on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 09:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Brother can you spare a dime?
I swear that it's for food this time.
It won't be spent on beer and wine.
Those were just mistakes of mine.
Brother can I stay with you?
Tomorrow I'll start my search anew
for the place I'll call my future home.
I'm tired and have no place to roam.
Brother please don't think me bad.
Your pleasant thoughts will make me
glad. I want to start my life again.
To rejoin in the affairs of men.
Brother please help me.
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2003-01-08 09:40:00]
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Re: Vagrant
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 10:48:56 AM AEST
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Omg where is the kleenex..this one hit home with me soooo deeply, it made me cry...thank you for sharing this one, your poetry sure does know how to pull at one's heart strings.....
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Re: Vagrant
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by sheigha on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 06:45:56 PM AEST
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I liked this poem alot...it makes you think about things a little more...thnx for sharing
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Re: Vagrant
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 08:27:02 PM AEST
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Dear Olddarkme,
Well done poem here my friend, too often in my life I have thought and seen these same things.. from both sides..
Always Nessa |
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Re: Vagrant
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by Arty_Sydney on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 02:21:40 PM AEST
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| nicely written, very simple but i could really feel the man in need.. |
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