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stir crazy
Contributed by
blackholesun
on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 10:56:50 PM in AEST
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i need to leave,
i must go,
i hate it here doesnt it show,
i ask to run but they tell me no,
they try to contol my evry move,
i got nothing else to prove,
my ankles raw from chains,
bound me tight in restraints,
frown upon my complaints,
i just want to be allone,
you have made me into a drone,
emotionless and stir crazy,
you call me ugly and lazy,
leave me in my tears to wallow,
give me poison to swallow,
clear the maggots from my heart,
give me a razor to create some art,
you just tore my soul apart.
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blackholesun
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2005-06-30 22:56:50]
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Re: stir crazy
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by emystar on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 11:33:41 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: stir crazy
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 02:06:28 AM AEST
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I like i like your style kinda *****ie like me.
Just keep expressing it on here. and i'll keep reading |
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Re: stir crazy
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by chaos_01 on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 05:14:09 AM AEST
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Such a poem cant be commented on as it seems like a very personal poem what could one say to such a overwhelming poem. But to me i like it the 4 last lines caught my eye.
good work |
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