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Break Up

Contributed by BloodyTearDrops on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 09:36:43 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

They were out one night
The he told her the news
and she ran out of his sight.

He told her is was not working out
That he had found some one else
that she was more of a woman and
their love he never doubted.

She did not know how to take it
It would kill her bit by bit
She did not think she would not make it.

She would see him every now and then
When she was out at this hot club
Called The Den.

She saw him with the new girl
She wanted to scream her head off
But then she saw she had a ring on her hand
And it was a beautiful pearl.

She went home that night
And she was in the mood for killing
So she found some knives
And the next thing she knew
She and the knives had got in a fight.

The next day her friend came to her house
She yelled for her friend but she did not answer
The house was so quiet You could hear a mouse.
She went up stairs
To her surprise
There was her friend
With a note that said
â€œI had to do this because, HE never cared.â€?

She ran out of her friends room
Ran down the stairs and out the house
She could not believe her this was her friends doom.

She ran to her friends EX-boyfriend
to tell him the story
And that is was his fault
That she could not mend.

He did not know what to do
But he thought of so many things
But he ex-girlfriend knew.

She went to her house to find what she needed
Then she put it in her pocket
She went up to him
Took out the gun and pleaded.
......................................
She killed him
She had to let out her anger
Goes to show you
Donâ€™t ever hurt some ones heart
They might go nuts
Think to strange things to do
Like the girl killed her self
Donâ€™t end up like her!

Copyright Â© BloodyTearDrops ... [ 2005-06-30 21:36:43]
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Re: Break Up (User Rating: 1 )
by A_New_Day on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 10:08:00 PM AEST
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That's really sad. I hope that never happens to anyone. Great poem, though.

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