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my fault
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 09:14:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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with these tears streaming from my eyes
do i finally realize
that no matter how i feel
this broken heart will never heal
its all my fault dont deny
i cause all of these tears i cry
because i cannot let this go
my lonliness will only grow
because of me i feel this pain
because of me i dwell in vain
because of you i have no heart
because of me im torn apart
left alone dont cast a care
its my fault that no one's there
i am broken and i know why
i blame myself for the tears i cry
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Re: my fault
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by BloodyTearDrops on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 11:54:00 PM AEST
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I thought it was very good. A few more words here and there. But i still liked it.
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Re: my fault
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by spazz911 on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 10:25:13 PM AEST
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jenny, chill u'll find some other guy better than neones b4 dont worry, hell i can't even get these ones now. so yea chin up,
great write
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