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Do you still care?
Contributed by
Froggy
on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 08:37:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Long lost love,
Where have you gone?
Reminiscent of
The sunrise at dawn...
Do you still care?
Do you love me?
Are you holding it in?
I hope you'll soon see...
I hope,
I'm free,
Taken a chance,
I need to see...
Do i still know you?
Do i still act like me?
Can you remember us?
Where could you be?
Copyright ©
Froggy
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2005-06-30 20:37:55]
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Re: Do you still care?
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by thegurl on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 08:52:40 PM AEST
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| good write. I can totally relate, my ex and I just broke up and he stills tells me he loves me everyday. |
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Re: Do you still care?
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by brokenwings on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 05:56:41 PM AEST
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| very good write, i still love my ex very much.. |
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Re: Do you still care?
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by SirensLight on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 08:09:42 AM AEST
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Icy fingers close around my heart
Trying to fight it my mind struggles
My hands shake as the pain washes over me
All thoughts are gone as the world fades
Fear comes behind my eyes
My body gives out
Fire burns through my veins
I am lost, this abyss surrounds me
Its darkness folds me into its embrace
All sense of time and reality is gone
And I become the slightest whisper of a memory
A shadow on your life that is soon forgotten
Au revoir mon cher... |
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