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Never Again
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 04:38:35 PM in AEST
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Have you ever sat and cried thinking about me
Have the days passed you by, or have they hardly
Dear old friend, it was a swell time spent, no regret
Dear no one I know longer, how have you been lately, I forget
To much sugar in a salad of overloaded tomatoes and red peppers
To much to remember in cold water, blasting, summer, rain showers
I was meant for someone else’s arms, hands and painted red toes
I was led to the place, the scene, and survived, surrounded by my foes
Have you ever stopped, wondered where I was right there and then
Have you ever seen the golden sun misplace then miss the horizon
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Re: Never Again
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 04:52:24 PM AEST
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Love it jyss...just love it. Full of hope, and you know I'm a big fan of that. Well done : )
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Re: Never Again
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 10:06:22 PM AEST
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at the risk of sounding like a ciche..
(most vivid imagery)
I have LIVED that last stanza..
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Re: Never Again
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 05:04:13 PM AEST
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| Very swell like your sytle here made a tear break the horiozon of my eye the right. Very well writen look forward to more from you |
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Re: Never Again
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 05:04:18 PM AEST
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| Very swell like your sytle here made a tear break the horiozon of my eye . Very well writen look forward to more from you |
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