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dont worry my friend

Contributed by hardrocker15198916 on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 01:22:03 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



dear friend with a shattered heart--->
you say these thigs to me that hurt me inside
tell me all your solemn tears that you cry

"tears that fall so crystal clear
for a dad to never see this year
fear that his time is soon
haunting fever; fear his doom

cannot tell my family the worry
cuz to him they face their fury
and all i do is worry for them
when all of it will stop and end

i cant tell you some things
cuz they may be horrid and obsene
clashing worlds so far apart
ripping away and destroying my heart

their anger brings sorrow tears to my eyes
trying to hide all of my dreadful cries
opening no part of those horrible times"

but it will go away soon
dont worry my friend
your pain will heal
ill help it mend

so dear dear friend of mine
dont cry so long and hard
hold your head high up
take charge

dont let those jerks keep youy down
tell them how you feel
'part of this will help you
and some of it will heal

cause one day youll regret
if you forgot to say goodbye
one day youll regret
hiding all your cries

............................yours truly
--> Ray




Copyright © hardrocker15198916 ... [ 2005-06-30 13:22:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: dont worry my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 09:35:52 PM AEST
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I really love this poem. If you can imagine it... this poem connected with me and touched me so much that it is even more than a personal hit. It didn't just touch me personally... it literally left a mark in my head. For such a long ime I have though about making a poem for my friend with a theme like yours. The thoughts have been lurking in my mind for such a long time but I have never been able to put it down on paper. Thank you for this write. It is inspiration that'll make me try once more to try and get my point out. Since I have seen it done and it is practically just like what I want to write, I know it can be done so I will do it. Thanks again...




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