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The dirt on dirty bones
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 12:11:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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i walk along the edge of sky
and tap my toes on stones
i love what's caught now in my eye
the dirt on dirty bones
see, i've always liked the dirty side
of life.. and beauty too
i paint what i once tried to hide
cause it's my duty to
the darkest pain black oil stain
contained by canvas blue
see the spiral's mindful strain
reflecting back in you
a skull for head but body strong
grips a flower's stem
the petal's pain does not belong
to you, to me.. or him
the swirling red moves heavy lead
thick blood throughout the vein
in madness it's hot soup instead
like sticking pitchforks in my brain
now it's time to fade...
dw
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Re: The dirt on dirty bones
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by Pats4eva7 on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 12:25:21 PM AEST
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Your writing style is simply breathtaking! Your flow and wording is amazing, you truly have a gift. Ive read many poems, but I can honestly say, ive never read one quite like yours. Your writing is intriging and I would love to read more and I look forward to it. Thanks for sharing!
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Re: The dirt on dirty bones
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 12:50:01 PM AEST
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Really good job Dwayne! You just keep getting better! I especially like the third stanza, but the overall descriptive quality was awesome, and it had a good flow too. Keep it up!!
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Re: The dirt on dirty bones
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by bgj on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 01:54:12 PM AEST
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Well written. Good job!
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Re: The dirt on dirty bones
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 02:46:29 PM AEST
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Very captivating, mysterious, and intreguing write. Rather abstract in form. A theme sort of like the Beauty and the Beast you might say. Life can be beautiful, but there is always a dark side.
Super write, I like your style
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Re: The dirt on dirty bones
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by PoisonousPyscho on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 04:20:23 PM AEST
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| your writing style in kinda like mine the wyayou set it up ...i absolutely love thepoem itself and i am goingto make sur ei read more by you |
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Re: The dirt on dirty bones
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 06:05:36 PM AEST
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Such flare with a pen dw. An outstanding very well written piece of poetry. I'm no real fan of dark poetry, but this was a truly amazing write that captured my attention from start to finish.
well done.
cheers,
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Re: The dirt on dirty bones
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 06:07:54 PM AEST
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Such flare with a pen dw. An outstanding very well written piece of poetry. I'm no real fan of dark poetry, but this was a truly amazing write that captured my attention from start to finish.
well done.
cheers,
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Re: The dirt on dirty bones
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 06:08:19 PM AEST
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Such flare with a pen dw. An outstanding very well written piece of poetry. I'm no real fan of dark poetry, but this was a truly amazing write that captured my attention from start to finish.
well done.
cheers,
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