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Torn
Contributed by
orgygirl
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Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 10:08:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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What I feel is hard to express
this horrible longing and this sense of distress.
I've never fallen harder head over feet,
with your eyes so kind and your words so sweet.
You made me feel special once in my life.
I built my world around you..
only to get strife.
If only you could feel the way i do,
love me too.
Getting with her was a shot to my heart,
but I guess I had it coming right from the start.
I never knew so much deceit,
but forbidden fruit is always sweet.
When I had your back where was she?
Where would you be if it wasn't for me?
Perhaps dead..
You didn't see me jump in the fight?
I risked it all that hot summer night..
You said you wanted me..
that you needed me.
So I allowed myself to trust.
Only to find out I was just an object of lust.
I thought you were different.
You really had me going.
God am I ignorant!
It seems to be showing...
Love is blind and so was I..
but i still cry..
I still wanna die.
Copyright ©
orgygirl
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2002-07-23 10:08:40]
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Re: Torn
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by Clarity on
Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 12:25:56 PM AEST
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no guy should ever be able to do that to u. it may seem hard to believe some days, but there r decent ones out there...the rest are just inspiration for really good bitter poetry...keep writing...u never know when u'll find someone worth writing happy thoughts about ;-)
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Re: Torn
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by orgygirl on
Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 12:18:06 AM AEST
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| Thanks Jen |
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Re: Torn
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by xFalling_of_Starsx on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 05:49:17 AM AEST
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| this is sooo good like all your work. i was almost in tears reading it. Your my heart hon. |
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Re: Torn
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by Chrissie on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 06:04:53 AM AEST
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This is very well written and very moving.
Chrissie |
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Re: Torn
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by withlove_me on
Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 05:00:35 AM AEST
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| In the whisper of smoke some people call love,there are always some that blow smoke rings.Continue to look forward,and someday that smoke ring will be a Gold Ring.Luv to u Rebecca,,good writing...withlove_me,, |
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Re: Torn
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by princesspurty on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 09:30:26 AM AEST
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| sometimes lifes lessons to prepare yourself for the best are learned the hard way, but remember as pure and sweet you keep your heart, then someone will want you to share it with them one day, I hope for the best for you, great poem even though its sad, keep up the great work! |
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Re: Torn
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by lilch4ever on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 12:45:40 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed reading this poem very good. Nice write. |
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