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Savior
Contributed by
JustAGirl001
on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 11:09:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I can't get these thoughts out of my head.
If I resort to my bed,
I'll be subdued to the nightmears again.
My nerves decieve, as I climb into bed.
The memories flash before my eyes,
as the trees dissapear, and I let out a cry.
The monster's coming,right on my tail.
I fall to my knees, on it prevails.
I crumble, defeated at last, fearing I've failed.
I've risen,in the wind,
you've come and rescued me at last,
my friend again,
till the end.
Copyright ©
JustAGirl001
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2005-06-30 11:09:17]
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Re: Savior
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by justme03 on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 06:19:06 PM AEST
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wow, this poem was filled with so much imagery and i absolutly loved it. i love all ur poems it so hard to pick a favorite , altho the zebra poo poem bout me is quite nice lol
lylas
keep up the writin
peace sista lol
~Kortnie~ |
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Re: Savior
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 08:53:24 PM AEST
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this poem is really good, i like how you keep it so visual, describing all your actions at the same tie as you provide adjectives to enhance the imagery even more
very good! please read mine and comment back
Matt
p.s. i especially like the title, and its vague but unmistakable reference to the poem and your friend |
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Re: Savior
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by MissMandy on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 08:07:28 PM AEST
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that's a neat poem, very original
keep writing
Mandy |
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