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Torn and Tattered
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 09:01:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Torn and tattered
The new day begins
Softly echoing
Past sins
Instead of hopeful
Filled with what ifs
What did I do?
What caused the rifts?
Torn and tattered
No answers coming forth
Left to doubt again
My self worth
Instead of growing
Am slowly dying within
What did I do?
What was my sin?
Torn and tattered
Again here we go
Back to the lows
I so well know
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2005-06-30 09:01:49]
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Re: Torn and Tattered
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by shelby on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 02:06:37 PM AEST
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you my friend did nothing wrong. Dont for a moment doubt yourself these troubles were the rest involved. As far as the silence goes well I dont know whats going on anymore than you Im being ignored as well
Hugs
Michelle
( you always have me and Im not going anywhere and thats a firm standing promise)
Get out here we'll go to Vegas and ion national park YIPPY!! |
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Re: Torn and Tattered
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 09:07:47 PM AEST
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Beautiful write but such a sad thought..
If ever ya need a shoulder..I'm here..
B |
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Re: Torn and Tattered
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by venkat on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 07:04:25 AM AEST
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No my dear friend you should not give in to such depression..you are a wise and warm hearted lady..O.k Shari, this is well written and heart touching..((hugs))
sincerely ..venkat |
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Re: Torn and Tattered
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 04:09:28 PM AEST
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Hang tough there, my friend...I'm sure it's their loss...... and they will soon realise it..
Jenni |
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