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Erotic Feelings
Contributed by
Belcha
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Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 08:39:38 AM in AEST
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Erotic by Joe Belcher
I picked up my hand and placed it on you
Shivers shot down my spine and then I knew
You made my knees go weak and my heart speed up
You made me feel like I was gonna throw up
But that was inside the excited butterflies
The feeling I had when I looked in your eyes
Shall I try and kiss those red lips
Move myself closer so we’re touching hips
Oh how beautiful this lady does seem
As I wake up and pinch myself it was all a dream.
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Belcha
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2005-06-30 08:39:38]
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Re: Erotic Feelings
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by brokenwings on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 01:49:50 PM AEST
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| have those dreams all the time.. good write |
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Re: Erotic Feelings
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 10:50:47 AM AEST
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| Great write Joe. I am lucky to be happily married to my soul mate and my best friend so.....these feelings I do know. Lovely descriptions. Peace to you. Laura |
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Re: Erotic Feelings
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by ceazer2005 on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:36:19 AM AEST
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| lol know exactly how you feel |
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