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When I Offered Friendship
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 07:54:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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When I offered friendship
It was honest and true
When I said I would be
A friend as long as wanted by you
I stand firm in this statement
I never have wavered one bit
When I offered my friendship
That was ultimately it
But I will not chase after
Nor force myself on anyone
So with distance and silence
I feel the friendship is done
So I will live my life
Until such time I hear
That a friend still thinks
Our friendship to them is dear
A saint I am not
But I do the best I can
I have days that are off
As any other human
I am in no way perfect
But then neither are you
So why do you think I must
Be compassionate in everything I do
I am a sinner as most
But trying everyday
To be a good person
In most everyway
Once in awhile I fall short
And that I can’t help I am sorry
But I will pick myself up apologize
And start a new page in the story
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2005-06-30 07:54:34]
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Re: When I Offered Friendship
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by brew on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 12:37:29 PM AEST
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Well said, and to the point. Cant ask for any more, now can you?! I hope they see, they have a true friend from you in deed. Good post.
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Re: When I Offered Friendship
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by shelby on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 02:15:40 PM AEST
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this almost made me cry I feel this and know right where your coming from. Im hoping that you get the response that your looking for as am I. You are a great friend, true blue and never doubt it for a second there arent many in this life I can say that I trust completely but that I have found in you and with you and that stands nomatter what else happens.
Your my sunshine and I love ya!
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Re: When I Offered Friendship
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 09:03:38 PM AEST
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great emotion..
I
love the last stanza..
B |
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Re: When I Offered Friendship
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 04:03:49 PM AEST
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Good write, Shari...I can identify with this....
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Re: When I Offered Friendship
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:01:06 AM AEST
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| Bravo, Shari. None of us are perfect and never will be. I am there if needed. I won't force you to be my friend. I will come to you when I need you, but don't expect to be your top priority. Friends, true friends are so hard to find. They are rare priceless jewels, totally irreplaceable. You are a marvelous lady, fantastic poetess and from what you have offered me, a true friend. I offer the same to you. Bless you, Rita |
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