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Forever Alone

Contributed by AmyLee4Ever on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 02:00:39 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Trapped underneath this dark, dead breath
It's my last, shall I fret?
Rising hopes that flew in the sky
Are now left so blank and dry
I'm crying out my sad story
Yet no one has come for me
There is no energy left for my spending
For I know now there can be no mending
I touched something I was never meant to feel
I now have my punishment, I will not heal
I should have never let you see
Just how vulnerable I could be
You saw the trust I had in you
And still didn't care, is that true?
My mind crumbles in an evil, deep pit
I look up to find my life is no longer lit
You have seemed to be able to move on with your life
But I still have the scar where I was stabbed with your knife
While stumbling along my deserted street
I frantically look to see what I can meet
No matter where I look ahead
Everything but me is lying dead
Though I'm not deceased I am still dying
You put me through this with all of your lying
If I had a choice, I'd rather be dead
But you have forced me to live inside of my weakened head
What will I do for the rest of my years?
I will hold on to this last breath while freeing my tears




Copyright © AmyLee4Ever ... [ 2005-06-30 02:00:39]
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Re: Forever Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 02:18:09 AM AEST
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Hrm, i wonder what brought me to read this poem..A very expressive one i may add, and a must read for the member with the nick...Forever Alone..lol.. ;p

~Clark


Re: Forever Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 02:19:55 AM AEST
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Very sad but my heart cries with u.
U r a great writer even tho u r in pain.
Keep writing sweetie.
I wish I could adopt u.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy


Re: Forever Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 11:35:07 AM AEST
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came over as a very sad and heartfelt piece.


Re: Forever Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 07:30:27 PM AEST
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"I touched something I was never meant to feel
I now have my punishment, I will not heal
I should have never let you see
Just how vulnerable I could be
You saw the trust I had in you
And still didn't care, is that true?"

Such an expressive and well written piece, Great job.


Re: Forever Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:57:21 AM AEST
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Why do you always make my eyes tear very good write now write some happy so i can cry for joy instead of saddness lol.
"MUH"!!!!!!!!!!!! JOEY


Re: Forever Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:28:10 PM AEST
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What an emotive piece Jodi...Great job! I love these two lines; "I touched something I was never meant to feel, I now have my punishment, I will not heal..." Wow. Excellent.

Scorp.


Re: Forever Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 04:54:21 PM AEST
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Jodi this is a sad, deep and emotional write. I'm so sorry u r hurting and in alot of pain. Hang tuff dear friend and all good things shall come ur way.
hundreds of heartfelt hugs for u,
Dreamer




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