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I Live For You
Contributed by
AmyLee4Ever
on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 01:54:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You're all I've got
Please hold me tight
Don't let me collapse on this dark dead night
Oh, baby, please comfort me
Without you I can feel nothing
I sleep to dream of you
I feel to know if your pain is true
I cry so you don't ever have to
I breathe to make sure the air is new
I live through you
I live for you
I'd die if I couldn't be with you
You're all I've got
Please hold me tight
You're all that I live for from day to night
You say to me
Oh, baby, don't leave me
You know I won't say no
You know I could never let you go
Copyright ©
AmyLee4Ever
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2005-06-30 01:54:59]
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Re: I Live For You
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 02:22:22 AM AEST
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Me like me like alot..lol..very good structure and I RELATE TO SO WELL..haha..you succeed...weeee...::runs around in circles for a minute and then gets back to business:: Great Job - again
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Re: I Live For You
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by emystar on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 04:52:06 AM AEST
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Awesome writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: I Live For You
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 10:33:48 AM AEST
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wow! What a loving and strong poem.. i'm envious of the emotions you spelled out in this piece.
keep up the great writing!
dw |
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Re: I Live For You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:53:34 AM AEST
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Your writes always bring a smile to my face.
I'm just jelous cause my girl wont do those things for me. Maybe you could talk some sense into her lol |
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Re: I Live For You
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 05:52:53 PM AEST
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Jodi u pour out all ur inner feelings and fears. You love, but are scared to lose. You've captured ur emotions so well in ur poem. You're a compassionate person and the fear of losing the one u love holds u back. Am I right? A superb heartfelt write that touches the heart. Well done Jodi.
Hugs,
Dreamer |
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