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pretend you are near
Contributed by
blackholesun
on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 12:59:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i close my eyes and pretend you are near,
if i try i can feel the warmth of your arms around me,as i scream out in pain your name.
i know you are somewhere feeling the same,
waiting for me to come home,
wanting to feel my warm breathe on your neck.
even though we are miles apart i loved you from the very start,
our love is a work of breathing art.
no matter what i write ...just cant seem to find the words that describe how u make me feel inside
you brought me to life,when i was dead
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Re: pretend you are near
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 10:40:25 AM AEST
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very nice work! sometimes it's too true that words can't describe well enough the emotions we feel for someone special.. thanks for sharing your fine writing
dw |
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Re: pretend you are near
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 02:14:11 AM AEST
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| I feel for you cause same as you i'm alone looking at the phone hoping for a call hoping to dream of her even when i do it dosn't come true so most we can do is be glad for are pen and pad but its still kind of sad |
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Re: pretend you are near
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by Thedreamer777 on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 03:21:24 AM AEST
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| This is one of my favorites, im your biggest fan. can you guess who i am?, let me give you a hint, im that person, your writing about. and i do agree our love is a work of art, so keep the art alive and i'll be waiting for the day you come home, never forget i love you. |
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Re: pretend you are near
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 09:20:58 AM AEST
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| and which guy is this one? Peter, James, Bart, your husband, your on-line lover? No it's none of my business, just hope your new boy realizes you like anything that gives you attention. |
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