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Contributed by InMyDisk3yez on Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 10:16:07 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

i spaek child, i spaek in colourphul dreamz
so bored, so alone without you here, so lost
i don't want your drugz, heavily medicated
i don't need your drugz, wrongfully sedated
hey god, can you cure my hatred for life?
hey man, can you give me drugz to kill my pain
hey yeah, said the rattlesnake by your feet
hey god, can you numb my animosity
hey man, can you kill the world around me?
hey jezus, can you drop your healing blood
from your wrists, down onto me
hey god, can you show me where i went wrong?
backstage pass, for the ghost of øzzmas past
just walk alone, my child of the rayne, and spaek to no one
spaek alone, my child of the wind, and walk with no one
hey god, can't you pleaze my burning fist?
hey doc, can't you medicate my sadness?
hey man, can't you see where we went wrong?
hey judge, can't you give me just one more try?
hey god, can't you give us one more chance?
hey drugz, theze people aren't listening to me
hey doc, am i too heavily medicated?
hey god, why can't they hear me?
hey drugz, get this voice out of my head
so walk alone, my child of the rayne
give your mind to no one

Copyright © InMyDisk3yez ... [ 2005-06-29 22:16:07]
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Re: medicated (User Rating: 1 )
by Cathi on Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 02:38:38 AM AEST
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What a sad and beautiful poem! I can see the speaker's suffering and almost feel it myself. I love the use of words and punctuation. It makes the imagery and emotion beautifully vivid. Well written!

Cathi

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