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It was a Pleasure to Make Your Acquaintance
Contributed by
jyssvw
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Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 09:42:45 PM in AEST
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It was nice talking to you
I hope I left an impression
It was a pleasure getting to know you
I am indeed a victim of fascination
I know you liked me
But to what extent
I know you don’t know me
But since when has that been relevant
It was nice watching you
Moving back and forth
It was exciting waiting for you
As you left once only to return
It was memorizing staring at your dress
How you wore your personality
How you bared it all on your chest
How your voice radiated confidence
And the perfume seem to come from your breathe
It was my honor to meet you
To make your acquaintance
To bequeath you with my omni presence
And have you reciprocate
With open hands and friendliness
You smiled and I had no choice
I smiled back, I just react
And you said you loved me
You loved me just like that
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Re: It was a Pleasure to Make Your Acquaintance
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 09:56:23 PM AEST
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| itwas such a sweet poem, and your poetic voice come out even more in the end. (by the way i LOVED the last two stanzas) you did a great job. |
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Re: It was a Pleasure to Make Your Acquaintance
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 10:20:58 PM AEST
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Bequeath....lmao what are the odds I almost used that in my write earlier? That's funny. Anyway, nice write....it kicked azzzzzzzzzz....lol Geez jyss...those last two lines...I don't know. You may want to keep her, cause you're a hard person to like sometimes, let alone LOVE I'm sure. What with your multi personalities and all....LOL : )
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Re: It was a Pleasure to Make Your Acquaintance
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 08:46:57 PM AEST
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If I haven't said it by now.. allow me to now-
'You are one of.. if not the most prolific poet on this site."
Rhyming is "quaint".. what you create is insolently beautiful.. (truth in honesty):
"I know you don’t know me
But since when has that been relevant"
This write..like your last.. was so 'simply' superlative
and triumphant..
I cannot say enough..
and can't wait to read your next post..
As Always..
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