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Darkness
Contributed by
PoisonousPyscho
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Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 09:32:22 PM in AEST
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Darkness
This darkness around me
It’s torturing and tormenting
It’s maiming and murdering
My mind
This darkness around me
It’s making these scars
These bloody red scars
On my heart and wrists
This darkness around me
It’s killing my heart
It’s stabbing and slicing
And tearing my heart
This darkness around me
Has ruined my life
My friends have all left me
And it’s causing me strife
This darkness around me
Has come to and end
Only for me to find out
My death is just around the end….
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Re: Darkness
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by THORN on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 10:07:15 PM AEST
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Take a deep breath and go slow.
Don't do that to yourself. I can safely say that having someone to love and someone to love you really can turn your life around. A couple of days ago, i cut. But a special someone made me promise not to. Patience truely is a virtue. Waiting for 'the one' can take years. But unbelievebly, in these past few days where i have needed someone more than ever, he has magically been there. Every time. I don't want to rub what James and I have in your face, don't get me wrong. All i am saying is that if you let someone love you, they will. Just give them a chance. You have so much love to give, just make sure it's the right person. After all, we don't want you getting hurt even more. You are going through a stressful time, i understand, but please - don't do that to yourself. Let's just wait and see.. ? Over time, things should get better. If not, maybe you will be happier moving to another town and starting over? I don't know what to suggest you do because i am afraid of the words coming out the wrong way.
But for now, i guess listening to some metal or gothic trance would help. I do not suggest DeadraveN however. They are fantastic, but it'll get you even more depressed, try to avoid them.
But on other notes, that was a very good poem. 5 STARS ;)
Cheers,
-xXRayeXx |
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Re: Darkness
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 10:43:42 PM AEST
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| I think I disagree with Raye. While being in love and being loved back is an exhilerating experience, yuo should not depend on another person to keep you happy. Besides, the power to do anything about how you feel or do has to come from inside you. No one else can do it for you. But, and I don't mean to sound parental, I think you should seek help. Like, drop into a shrink or somethin g because you're heading into a spiral whether you know it or not. I don't know how far down you've traveled so far, but please, just do it for me. I used to cut nearly every day and i attempted suicide 8 times. (What can I say? I'm persistant, lol). I finally went to a hospital and then a stwp down. With all that help, I think it came from somwhere inside myself that I found a tunnel in the darkness. There was a spider's thread of light and somehow I grabbed onto it. I don't think I'd have been able to do it if i didn't find help, though.And the fact that you want help shows that there's a chance, a chance to never have to feel this way again. It's hard work, but once you make it out of the cyclone of depression, it's like the world is born again. I'm sorry I'm sounding so damn preachy... I hate people who talk like this... I used to get soooo p***ed off when people wrote comments like this... damnit.... |
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Re: Darkness
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 10:49:35 PM AEST
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I'll pray 4 u.
huggs,
emy
A true friend want leave u. Ya gotta reach way deep and find your own inner confidense in yourself. |
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Re: Darkness
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by justme03 on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 12:07:34 PM AEST
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I used to cut myself and i thought all my frends had left me when it really turned out that I had left them because i was scared and i thought they didnt care neway. one day tho my sister found out about what i was doing and she helped me thru. im here 4 u, i believe in u. promise me u will stop cutting yourself, i dont want my favorite poet to die . i love you.
(hugs) im gonna have u in my prayers
~Kortnie~ |
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Re: Darkness
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by crazygirl on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 02:11:07 PM AEST
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Amazing write, but just so you know the scars do fade,and that things turn around in the end. I know waiting for it is the worst part, but it can happen; i hope you stop hurting yourself
with love
-bailey rose- |
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