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Stuck like Chuck
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 09:26:10 PM in AEST
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I can’t imagine why the river bothers to curve
Or the drunk driver couldn’t just swerve
I can’t decide on what to wear on a special night
The black tuxedo, just in case the waiters wear white
I can’t comprehend how birds fly effortlessly in the storm
Or how the rainbow ends but never touches down on earth
I can’t see how the mountains were once under the ocean
Or how the waves are caused by the moons flagrant motion
I can’t believe that nothing you have ever said was true
How the lies were fakes and the truths were mistakes
And there was never one once of true devotion
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2005-06-29 21:26:10]
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Re: Stuck like Chuck
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 09:33:52 PM AEST
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| i LOVED it, except for the last line which lost me. All the questions so simple leads to somthing so complex we dont even know. great job!! |
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Re: Stuck like Chuck
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 11:24:59 PM AEST
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Well the last line didn't lose me...haha but I won't point it out...I love the wonderful, diverse imagery you present in this write. I have an urge to get all philosophical, but I'll suppress it...lol I'll just say very nice job with this poem, and...the title says it all.....
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Re: Stuck like Chuck
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 07:55:07 PM AEST
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Man..I love this..
I got lost reading it..
if but for a second or two-
so simple and profound.. this was.
so very very well written..
awesome.. just awesome.
B |
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Re: Stuck like Chuck
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 08:02:10 PM AEST
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I understood the last line..
(lest the simple mishap on the keys my friend)
we all should know that you meant to say 'ounce'
(takin time to say "magnificent" again, my friend..)
As Always..
Billy
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Re: Stuck like Chuck
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 07:09:40 PM AEST
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| Perfect just perfect there's nothing better then perfect |
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