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Poetic and Pathetic

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 06:34:20 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

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Thinking of the words to say,
I'd like to think that this was fate.
Reference to a song you love,
Spell confusion with a 'k'.
Like a star without its strings,
I'm hanging here on these two wings.
For that smile and those eyes...I'm falling

If time could stop, how could I make this more poetic?
When there's nothing more pathetic to be said...

You bring me out, show me light,
I'm sorry if I hide, I'm too afraid to look inside.
You carry through, you make me smile.
If it were you and me tonight,
I would tame the stars and save the brightest one for you,
For you...

If you ever had the chance,
Would you make your life seem right?
Or would you only hold it back,
The good times, the hard, and the bad.
Whatever you say is alright,
Just as long as there's no doubt.
Could you look me in the eyes...And say hopes died

Our wish,
Each time,
Keeps me returning to you,
Night after night...
Lift me up as high as the clouds that warm the sky,
For you and I...

You can break my heart open
And ruin my epic ending
You hand like a noose around my neck...

I've come to accept
The things that I see
I've read every word, every line, everything...
Just say what you will
Just tell me I'm scared
I won't let you down for the moment I'm in...

I've come to accept
The fact from my head
I'm lost and alone in this life that I've led
I'll figure this out
It's summers away
A choice that may leave me with no room to say...

If it happens it happens and I'll feel the same
Can't hold back on the choices I made...
If it happens it happens and I'll be the same
Can't hold back on the choices I made that day

If time could stop, how could I make this more poetic?
When there's nothing more pathetic to be said...

Copyright © MajesticPoet ... [ 2005-06-29 18:34:20]
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Re: Poetic and Pathetic (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 09:26:50 PM AEST
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i actually dont think theres anoything pathetic about this poem. i think its awesome, it was descriptive and had so much feeling. i loved it. great job.

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