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Psychobabble
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 05:27:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Delusions of the weary mind
leave chemical traces behind
Your life is hanging by a strand
the taste you've left, is altered...bland
Questions lie within your heart
stuck in the past---or make a fresh start?
It's really not as complex as you make it out to be
search your soul for answers, what is it you foresee?
Solace comes in many shapes, sizes, and forms
swallow the pills of yesteryear and inhabit their deadly swarm
Take a swig of pity, but don't forget a nibble of regret
let nostalgia cloak you; sorrow and tears beset
Keep a framed memory by your bedside
watch with angst as hope and despair collide
Shun a chance at real love---forgotten
feed your heart shades of grey---spoil it rotten
I'll leave you with a final thought...
Why did you part ways to begin with...or have you forgot?
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2005-06-29 17:27:20]
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Re: Psychobabble
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 05:38:27 PM AEST
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Awesome piece here Scorp, a real winner..amazing job, as always
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Re: Psychobabble
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by jyssvw22 on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 06:45:11 PM AEST
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nice job scorp
lots of truth
i love the last final though, good point!..lol |
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Re: Psychobabble
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 08:23:54 PM AEST
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| Wow!!! Simply a fantastic write. Greatly said as only you can do with your sharp mind and wonderful talent. :) |
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Re: Psychobabble
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 08:46:41 PM AEST
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a great poem which conveys excellent advice.
wizard |
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Re: Psychobabble
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by CurtisC on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 10:35:28 PM AEST
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wow, this poem was incrdible! I'm kinda goin through something like that at the moment so this really got through to me....great job, thanks for posting :)
Curtis |
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Re: Psychobabble
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 11:23:19 PM AEST
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You really did well on this one scorpy girl.
great job |
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Re: Psychobabble
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 12:58:10 AM AEST
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A great poem, an even greater lesson, well
written along with a fascinating question . . .
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Re: Psychobabble
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 11:06:26 AM AEST
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Great write, Scorp. The poem really reads well; and harbors a lot of truth and wisdom. I think the last line of the poem is particularly poignant: that really drives your message home. Psychobabble.....I love that title!
Well done, Scorp
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Re: Psychobabble
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 12:23:59 PM AEST
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Oh my god!! that's such a good poem! it's so insightful and loads up the truth like a gun.. and it's so me! hey, you're not reading my mind are you? are you??? just kiddin
very awesome poem, i love reading your stuff
thanks for sharing and keep it up.
dw |
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Re: Psychobabble
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by boobiepeach on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 01:00:19 PM AEST
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"Take a swig of pity, but don't forget a nibble of regret"
great one scorp. past love can kick you in the rump. it has almost been a year for me and i still go to bed with a sore tushie at times.
awsome write.
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Re: Psychobabble
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by Dorkfish on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 04:22:23 PM AEST
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| That was an excellent one. I really felt what you were feeling there. Great use of emotion and words. I really enjoyed that one and I'm sorry you're so upset about this past love. |
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Re: Psychobabble
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 04:51:58 PM AEST
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I feel your pain Scorp..
I implore you to stay the course..
wash through all that.. -the pain-
you'll be better and stronger for it.
(here for you anytime friend..)
B |
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Re: Psychobabble
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 10:44:48 PM AEST
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| Great write Scorp. This little piece spoke volumes. The last line made such an excellent point. Peace. Laura |
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Re: Psychobabble
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by emystar on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 08:04:21 AM AEST
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Life is hard at times and I certainly can relate to these awesome words, be it anger, hurt or jus thoughts.
A masterpeice.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Psychobabble
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 09:34:55 AM AEST
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ha! love it and the endline is excellent!
this is a beauty my friend:)
hugs n' love nessa
*still laughing at endline heh* |
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