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The Densest Wood
Contributed by
SmokinJoeEvil
on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 03:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I found a path
Through the densest wood
And though I seemed so lost,
It lead me to warmth,
A sun-filled clearing,
And a butterfly lit upon my nose.
"Hello there," I said,
But the force of my breath
Scared it straight away.
A cloud covered the sun,
And a chill hit the breeze,
And I found myself lost again.
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SmokinJoeEvil
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2003-01-08 03:20:00]
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Re: The Densest Wood
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 09:55:53 AM AEST
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This is so sad....you explained feeling lost so perfectly here, my favorite line was But the force of my breath scared it straight away.....that was so sad....thanks for sharing this one i enjoy reading your poetry...
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Re: The Densest Wood
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by roisin on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 07:32:02 PM AEST
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| tis so easy to scare those butterflies, without meaning to.....so sad when they fly away...a nice read...thank you |
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Re: The Densest Wood
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:30:27 AM AEST
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I really like this. So much said in so few words.
Stitch |
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