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Shattered Hope
Contributed by
spazz911
on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 03:11:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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lifted high at the thought of you
but crused into the ground
never lift that high again
because the fall is grand
i learned not to get my hopes up
it just hurts to much at that
when all my hopes are shattered
i lie here still and dead
maybe that thought was great
and left much to be desired
or mayb it was late
and i'd missed the thing entire
so all those possibilities
only one will come so true
and it has never been to good to me
i dont know if i'll make it through
the fall is rough i can't take it again
i fell and shattered down
don't make me pick me up again
for then i'll hide inside my shell
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spazz911
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2005-06-29 15:11:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Shattered Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 03:23:17 PM AEST (User
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"i learned not to get my hopes up
it just hurts to much at that"
A very emotional write and I can definitely
relate to the above lines. Very well written with
an honesty that I respect and admire. I hope
that this write will help you not to break again.
Stay strong.
Bobo (Joel) |
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