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why was i the last one to know

Contributed by remi on Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 02:12:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

(WHYY) WAS I THE LAST ONE TO KNOW

May 5, 05
12:51 pm
Revise May 11, 2005
2:06 pm

Whyy was I the last one to know
That u were walkin away from this relationship and leave me standin here thinking u were comin back to me but u deceive me

Whyy was I the last one to know that u big master plan was to avoids me and not take my calls and hope I catch the hints

U are such a ***** what a punk ass ***** coward way to go out I was the last one to know that about u

Whyy was I the last one to know that every time I give my trust to a man he take it and cripple me with it nearly killin me in the process

As I lay on the bed at the hospital Dr Life looks at me and said I donâ€™t think I can keep fixin ur broken heart next time u come in u might not make it next time

Why was I the last one to know that my heart is dlyin from all the past ***** that I went though and that bein overweight is killin my heart?

Why was I the last one to know that u were gonna walk out on this relationship and leave me thinkin that u were comin back
But I guess it my entire fault I miss the 2 segments of Oprah â€œHe not that into youâ€?

So I did the crime of love and passion now I do the time of heartache and pain

Why was I the last one to know that u were gonna stapled me in the heart

Who do u think u are messin with me u think u can walk over me that it was gonna take

I guess u were the last one to know I canâ€™t wait until u come to my door askin me why, why

Pandora La Rue

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Re: why was i the last one to know (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 02:28:45 PM AEST
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heart break is a terrible thing. i love how you captured the feeling and emotion though.

great write

- Beth -

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