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Hand Me That Gun Please
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 01:45:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I am your worshiper, your slave
A true admirer of your face
A believer of your dreams
I encourage you to be free
I am your confidence
With which you brim
With which you approach
A hurtful situation so grim
I wipe on that silly grin
And wipe off that tear
That sparkles in your eye
And hand you my heart
And all my love I impart
I am your listener, your proverbial ear
I am your wanderer
Searching for our comfort
I want to be your everything
Your all-encompassing body of truth
I am your follower
You are my flower
I am the ground on which you walk
I am the syllables of which you talk
I am the chronicles which you have been taught
I am the meaning for the question you sought
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I am your pet, your patsy, your escape
I am just one in many, many of the same
Many of the times we went insane
I was just acting, pretending on the stage
I am your nastiness when you are disgusted
I am your sloppiness when the shine has rusted
I am your unhappiness when the time has passed
I am the kick when your leg makes its pass
I am the idiot who wasted these words so fast
I am the pilot who commissioned the crash
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jyssvw22
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2005-06-29 13:45:03]
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Re: Hand Me That Gun Please
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 02:01:35 PM AEST
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Very nice job with the metaphorical speak...I like this write, and I really like the way you switched it at the end. Well done.
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Re: Hand Me That Gun Please
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by Remi on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 05:10:47 AM AEST
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nice writing i love the order u put this in, good job
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Re: Hand Me That Gun Please
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 07:15:07 PM AEST
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just got one thing to say
GRRRRRRRRRRREAT |
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