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One is Lonely
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 12:34:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You all say it,
That all of this
Will go away
But it is here everyday
I’m all alone
And on my own
You say that you are there
But I ask, “There is where?�
You say you’re at my side
But it must all be in my mind
For it is you I do not see
It is just my shadow and me
You say not to fight it alone
But how can I not? When I’m on my own?
You say you are always there
And I repeat; “There is where?�
I look all around
You are no where to be found
I call for you, but I am no fool
I know you are just trying to be cool
You say that you are my friend
But I know that in the end
You I will not see
It’ll be just my shadow and me
One is so lonely
And I am slowly
Sipping away
Every day
There is no one else
Just me and myself
You all tell lies,
Looking right into my eyes
Oh well, I’m used to being alone
And fighting it on my own
Used to not seeing any one else
Used to being by myself
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Re: One is Lonely
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by KantKureLyfe on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 12:42:20 PM AEST
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| Such sadness and a sense of feeling abandoned. But beautifully expressed. You captured the feeling of being alone even though you know you may not be. I loved it. |
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Re: One is Lonely
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 01:10:00 PM AEST
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Nicely expressed emotions Sprints...A very sad, but truthful write. I really liked the third stanza.
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Re: One is Lonely
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by ChinaRivera on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 01:21:44 PM AEST
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| Awwwww, i'll be your friend so ou wont be lonely. ;) Nice write. I really liked it, i definitely can relate to that. |
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Re: One is Lonely
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by gwenevere on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 02:45:09 PM AEST
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| Such a sad write.You express the feeling of loneliness extremely well.An intense write,ros |
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Re: One is Lonely
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by bgj on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 02:54:37 PM AEST
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I like it. Good job!
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Re: One is Lonely
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 07:29:40 PM AEST
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It's impossible for you to be a zero..(nothing)
you have friends here..
you can talk to me anytime..
nice write-
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